英语四级考试写作笔记(1) - 四六级

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　　写作的重要性 6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分。

　　评判作文

　　四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

　　内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人;2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。

　　结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。

　　语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。

　　基本表达

　　人们认为：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that

　　越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of

　　万能理由(Omnipotence)

　　1. 方便：convenient/ convenience

　　2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency

　　3. 节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift; waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish

　　4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive,considerate, confident, creative, sociable,perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative

　　5. 人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic

　　6. 娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax, tired, boring, lonely

　　7. 环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty

　　8. 安全和危险：safe, danger, risk

　　9. 经验：experience, social experience, enter the society

　　10. 人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely

　　写完之后修改注意：(内容方面尽量不要修改)

　　1、字母大小写

　　2、怪符号

　　3、单词拼写

　　4、主谓一致

　　5、动词时态

　　6、名词单复数

　　实例一

　　题目：Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提纲：(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及(2)和汽车的比较(3)自行车在中国的前途

　　Score: 8

　　Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.

　　The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car.

　　In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.

　　Score: 14

　　Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.

　　注：1. 第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。

　　2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。

　　3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

　　Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.

　　注：1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。

　　2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于

　　3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感，信号词

　　4. cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive

　　5. be good for health 对健康有好处(万能理由)

　　6. Moreover 表示递进

　　In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.

　　注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man

　　Score: 11

　　There millions of bicycles in today’s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.

　　注：第一句应该用there be结构

　　Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.

　　I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved.

　　I、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为……; 2.另外一些人认为……; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)

　　实例二 99年6月真题

　　Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

　　Outline: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的想法

　　How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.

　　Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.

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