新东方英语四级考试写作范文及点评 - 四六级

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　　b. New efforts will bring ...

　　4. More and more

　　1) a. More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.

　　b. People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.

　　2) a. More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.

　　b. The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.

　　3) a. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.

　　b. Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.

　　4) a. More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.

　　b. There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.

　　5) a. More and more trees have disappeared in the city.

　　b. There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.

　　社会热点话题

　　写作练习：Jobs for Graduates

　　1) 大学生难找工作

　　2) 原因很多

　　3) 解决的办法

　　With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education (高等教育). As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.

　　范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job. Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.

　　The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter. According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000. Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs?

　　第二段细节论证

　　分析原因：

　　1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...

　　2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to ...

　　3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in ... mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors ...

　　Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand. Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...

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