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第一部分 写作——特训练习与范文
训练一
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Graduates Work as Village Officials. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 你是否认为大学生当村官是个好主意;
2. 大学生能给乡村提供些什么;
3. 大学生能从村官职位中获得什么。
College Graduates Work as Village Officials
训练二
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Continuing Education. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)上图为某城市2002-2008年参加继续教育的人数情况，请描述其中的变化;
2)分析导致该变化的原因;
3)谈谈你对继续教育的看法。
训练三
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Water Shortage. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 水资源短缺已成为严重问题;
2. 造成水资源短缺的原因;
3. 提出解决方案。
On Water Shortage
答案与解析
训练一
【范文】
College Graduates Work as Village Officials
Nowadays many college graduates choose to work as village officials in the remote areas. To this, people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.
Above all, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. First, they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged. In addition, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are fighting for the handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.
Therefore, college graduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.
【点评】
文章描述大学生当村官这一现象，并分析其带来的诸多好处。第二段运用Above all, in addition, 引出了两点好处，在使用First, Secondly将第一点好处细化，这样使文章层次清晰。本文使用了一些精彩的语言，使文章增色不少，例如：contribute a lot to，speed the development，a win-win choice等等。
训练二
【范文】
A Boom in Continuing Education
From the graph, we can learn the number of continuing education participants has kept increasing from 2002 to 2008 in X city. In 2002 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in the continuing education, but in 2004 the number grew to 70 thousand, and in 2006 150, and by 2008, the number has reached 230 thousand. It can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining more and more popularity。
The following reasons are responsible for this boom in continuing education. Firstly, during the work many people begin to realize what they have learned in schools is far from enough. So they turn to continuing education to gain more knowledge and skills. Moreover, as the science and technology in China are developing very fast, adults after graduation have to refresh themselves. In addition, in modern society, those without bachelor's degrees or above are less competitive。
As far as I am concerned, the boom in continuing education is a necessity. It provides those on-the-job people with chances to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge. As our society develops, more and more people will receive continuing education in the future。
【点评】
文章提纲式图表作文。第一段对图表反映数据进行介绍。第二段运用The following reasons are responsible for顺势提出这种现象产生的原因。第三段作者用As far as I am concerned提出自己的观点，使文章结构紧凑，层次分明。
本文使用了描述数量的词汇increasing from …to …, grew to …，reached 以及In addition，provides … with…, to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge等一些精彩的语言，成为文章亮点。
训练三
【范文】
On Water Shortage
No one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted. Actually, it has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.
A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the critical ones. To begin with, with the development of agriculture and industry, an increasing amount of water is needed. In addition, the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage. Besides, the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem. What’s worse, pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources. Secondly, people should enhance their awareness of saving water. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.
【点评】
文章以描述人类面临水资源匮乏问题进入主题并且对人们的生活造成影响，逐步引伸到造成水资源匮乏的原因，最后提出解决措施进行展望。文章内容符合提纲要求，并且文章使用so…that…;it is essential that +虚拟语气等句式，以及account for，ever-increasing，contributes to，In view of 等词汇的使用显示出考生的语言功底。另外，第二段to begin with, in addition和第三段First, Secondly的使用使论述层次清晰。
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